You know those trailers in the cinema that reveal so much about the movie you end up feeling that you don’t need to bother going to see it?
Not only that…but they also leave you with the feeling that the movie must be lousy if they have to show you so much in order to sell it.
That is what this blurb feels like.
It goes on and on and on and on.
Not only is it outfacing — but by the end you feel like you’ve garnered all the good bits.
Quite simply it is trying too hard and saying too much.
This blurb’s greatest value is in reminding us that you don’t seduce consumers by repeatedly clubbing them over the head.

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